I am applying to the Jim Moran College of Entrepreneurship at FSU which is a limited access program. My intended major is Commercial Entrepreneurship . One of the requirements is a Personal Statement/Essay (This is VERY important!): I need to explain why I am interested in the JMC major I selected and why I want to be an entrepreneur. I will upload a draft I have worked on but am open to your suggestions, even if it means re-writing the essay from a different angle, in order to improve my chances of being accepted. I also will upload a resume which I am required to submit as well, and they want to see evidence of prior entrepreneurial activity. Please could you also work on this in conjunction with the essay.